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Three Square Meals Ch. 120

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/28/19

I knew something was coming, but not that. That was pure Tefler.

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by ZZchromosome04/28/19

Holy crap... this all started so nicely with new catgirls and... wow.

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by Anonymous04/28/19

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............................................. W T F

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by GoesGrunt04/28/19

Frustration

Probably the single most irritating cliff hanger I've ever read.

I hope the next chapter isn't long coming out. I doubt I'll be the only one getting more and more grumpy waiting.

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by lanncer04/28/19

Holy encounter

Getting good

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by SirCarl04/28/19

OMG!

No, not our girls! What a cliff hanger! Tefler you have out done yourself. Excellent read.

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by Anonymous04/28/19

Surprisingly Different plot.

Quite a refreshing and surprisingly different plot towards the end so many possibilities of turn of event from here ,Thanks for the shifting gears Great Work.

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by Anonymous04/28/19

whawhaWHAT!!!!!!

Holly shit! Pardon my french here, but that has to be the most HELLISHLY EVIL cliffhanger ever!!!! The Invictus is gone, and all of them is taken. It's game set and match for Larn. I don't see how they can get out of this. Is this the beginning of the end of Three Square Meals?

Well, John certainly will need his new levels of psychic energy. That is, if his nymphs and other girls survived. If not, the situation is even worse. And poor Faye? She is gone, forever, or maybe not. Her server could be intact, just offline. Or maybe her body survives. Maybe she and the service bots can come to the rescue. If the nymps and the other girls survives, maybe they can help to. But they are up against hundreds, maybe thousands of thralls. plus Larn himself.

One slight advantage John and the girls may have, if they survived, is that they aren't ordinary thralls, he has given them powers way beyond that of a thrall soldier. But in this situation that simply isn't enough.

I hate bad endings. Yeah, it doesn't need to be rainbows and sunshine and unicorns, but at least there should be a glimmer of hope for a better future at the end of a story.

This is the fire and brimstone ending i never would have thought any author had the balls to come up with. I could cry!!!

AAAAAAHHHHHHHH! (taking a deep breath)

I am better now. But the end of this chapter really shook me up. Logically i know there is a continuation. There was no The End at the conclusion of the chapter, And John, and his Girls if they survive, definitelly will at least go down fighting. Is there a glimmer of hope? Please Tefler! Pretty Please!!

Anyway, this is perhaps your best chapter so far. I just hope that it doesnt mean that the journey is soon over. I wish for many more chapters.

Keep up the freaking fantastic work Tefler.

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by Anonymous04/28/19

First

Wow never been first before.

This is the chapter where Tefler exceeds himself.

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by nightcoder04/28/19

121 is even better

If you guys think this chapter was amazing, wait to read 121 (already posted on patreon).
Geezuz ... Tefler exceeds expectations again.

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by Anonymous04/28/19

T.S.M O sh1t

si/fidave you did it . you broke my HEART HAD ME MAD AT YOU ALL WE WANT ..IS MORE .THANK YOU ...WOW...AND ...AND NEXT....121 YEE HAA

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by Anonymous04/28/19

To all those frustrated about such a big cliffhanger and having to wait to find out what happens, ill make it even worse by saying that the next chapter is freaking AMAZING and probably my favorite one ever :)

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by Anonymous04/28/19

WOW WOW WOW

My God you wicked evil wizard! What a rush! Two pages and this story is on it's head!

Nothing like leaving you hanging from the ragged edge of a Titanium hull hoping not to be sucked out into space.

Cheers

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by Geon5404/28/19

Avocation

Tefler, any chance you design roller coasters on the side? I only ask because most of the ones I've ever been on (and I'm 60+) pale in comparison to this chapter.

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by fromindia04/28/19

Where am I????

I am not sure to say what a cliffhanger. It's beyond that. Wow just wow. Take your time and post after a month please. I want to be drunk in my thoughts at what comes next. Great creation. Thanks Tefler.......

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by Cignal04/28/19

121

Guys 121 part 1 is on his Patreon page />If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

by taco108504/28/19

amazing

this is the best cliffhanger yet, amazing use of characters and can't wait to see how this all pans out.... way to go John and crew....

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by EmotionalStorm04/28/19

Character Break

Not that it is relevant for how this chapter ended. Rachel should have insisted on collecting one of the dead thrall from the previously unknown species. To study them.

Great plot twist though. I am curious how the progenitors mange to locate each other. Also how he knows where John is going to next; always ahead of him.

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by kimberklr04/28/19

WTF!!!

i feel like I've been shaken around.

so many thoughts and questions rolling around in my head.

best chapter yet but as said please don't make us wait to long for the next. lol

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by Fatlad7704/28/19

Tef mate...

Are we in the Endgame now?

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by Anonymous04/28/19

The Nymphs and Faye

Spoiler Alert! They are all dead. They burn up reentering the atmosphere. Ship cut in half, power out...all...d.e.a.d!!!!!

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by ender2k2k04/28/19

Best chapter yet.

And the most disturbing cliff hanger since Infinity War. Wow. I hope the next chapters post soon. Thanks,

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by litreader969604/28/19

Dread...

Why do I have this nasty feeling that Dana's dread at the stated position of the damage just below the fire control tower is in reference to either her lab, or Faye's server room? Without the lab, the chances of getting back into the fight are slim, if they survive reentry.

As for the girls on the raptor, it's not stated, but I wonder if any of the other girls got into their armor after John and Alyssa suited up and went to the cockpit... Alyssa being in armor can survive in open space, but I'm not sure about Jade, since she never suits up, outside of testing new armor back in the early days.

There are too many unknowns, so I won't speculate too much on the outcome of the two halves of the Invictus, may she rest in peace, and the Raptor, crashing. It's probably too much to hope for that everyone lives, since that just isn't realistic. Plot-wise, I'm comfortable with Jessica being the red shirt of the piece. Her death could be some serious motivation for John to kick this upstart's ass. If both his parents are killed before he has a chance to get to know them, or whatever, those are some serious feelings to channel against Larn.

The Nymphs might survive, since they have been strengthened by John, as well as being in the lagoon. Maybe the water, combined with their natural physiology and John's upgrades, could mitigate the worst outcome.

Faye could be saved. All that needs to survive are her data crystals. The rest can be rebuilt. I fear for Faye's daughter, though, as well as the boys and cleaning bots. Will all her work be lost?

As for the girls in the Raptor...the only way out I see is for Edraele to flood Alyssa with energy, having felt the danger through the Matriarch's link, and Alyssa using that energy to pull off a miracle. Whether that miracle includes saving the Nymphs as well as those on the Raptor, who knows.

As for getting back in the fight, I don't know what good it will do, but if Dana can't work with what they salvage from the crashed Invictus, Edraele could send at least one ship to rescue the survivors from Arcadia. From there it's up to Tefler to pull something out of a hat...

Now you have to wonder what Larn has planned for his two prisoners. Sounds like Rahn is still alive, so there might be a prisoners reunion between father and son. I'm not holding my breath for a touching father-son bonding scene, culminating in a cliche father sacrifices himself to save his son after imparting what knowledge and advice he can, situation.

All of this going down just as a plot against Johns allies on Olympus just sucks!

I foresee many late nights checking for 121, hoping against hope that it comes out on Lit as fast as the last two, being first 15 days, then 9 days, apart. If you start from 117, the last chapters have been posted three weeks apart, then two, now just over one week apart.

Unfortunately the previous poster's link to Tefler's Patreon page showed a message from Tefler saying the writing has slowed down, due to "half-term", whatever that is. (Ignorant Yank, here.)


Finally, I'll end with my feelings of loss at the destruction of the Invictus, especially with the ironically lazy mirroring of both father and son's ships being destroyed and crashing on the same GAIA class "paradise" planet. If Charles survives the assassination attempts, he is going to be wicked pissed at John for letting the Invictus get shot down, and from only two salvos at that.

We knew, from the obvious foreshadowing, that the Invictus was rapidly reaching a point where she couldn't be updated any further, and would need to be replaced by their version of a Progenitor Dreadnaught. That said, I don't think many TSM readers were expecting her to be "phased out" quite like this. So much of John's abilities and identity are tied to that ship.

Unless the Maliri sent to rescue the survivors on Arcadia come from the fleet in Trankaran space, and return there, where a supremely motivated Grand Engineering Overlord is introduced to the Star Forges, and the girls, with power from Edraele, use the forges to make the Invictus Rex, I don't know how they're going to get out of this one, except to say that they must or Tefler's promised sequel to TSM will end up a spin-off instead..

That said, I have this wild hope that the Maliri do rescue all of the women from Arcadia, take them to Trankaran space, where they go full A-Team, with all of them pitching in to not only build the Invictus Rex, but to have it be even better than Larn's Dreadnaught. Dana will obviously be motivated to not only recreate, but surpass standard issue Progenitor tech, from Paragon armor and weapons, to the Invictus Rex itself. If they can salvage Faye's data crystals, and possibly even her server, she will have access to all of the Vulkat data she hadn't finished going through, and she could use it to augment the hell out of the new ship.

Even with the Star Forge able to basically "pour" an entire ship in one go, building the Invictus Rex could take months to complete, and that's if Larn leaves them in peace to do it. Thankfully, John releasing his women from complete thralldom should help them not end up like Jessica is after only a week apart from Rahn.

If Tefler aligns the stars just right, Dana stands a chance to use all she has been given by John, as well as the Vulkat, to build a ship to save the day. Then, down the road, when John and the girl's progenitor daughters and sons grow up, hopefully without the Progenitor infighting instincts, they could build a fleet of white Progenitor Dreadnaughts to safeguard their territory for all time, while the others keep using the standard issue equipment.

Somnambulant rant over.

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by Anonymous04/28/19

Well...

....shit.

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by Anonymous04/28/19

This was great!!

Haven't been inspired to post since the early early days, when things were still in the 20s or 30s :)
This was brilliantly good. The first half with the Nymphs was great …. the visit to Arcadia great … and then this!
Breadcrumbs: Faye noticed something, but didn't tell John. Faye's daughter also learning about love … and the bots increasingly self aware. Are they all out with Faye, or do they have their own backup power, not tied to the ship's power?
Alyssa did something with Jessica. What? did she read her mind and find out more?
Jessica halfway said things to John, but did not finish. Is she Jessica? Did she know that she was bait?
Alyssa had on a progenitor suit. She will not have been depressurized.
Much was made of Jade's new psychic power being upped. She was piloting the ship, and is way more resilient than people. Seems unlikely that she would have been impacted by the "shaking" of the progenitor. In general - they had a few seconds to plan prior to John being taken. Is he really unconscious?

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

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by Anonymous04/28/19

Tefler, you best not be imitating George R.R. Martin or I'm going to be really upset.

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by BigYin198104/29/19

Oh boy

Larn'kelnar is a dead man, he just doesn't know it yet....

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by Anonymous04/29/19

Well....

They’re going to need a new name for their next ship. Invictus is no longer correct. The team was surely conquered this time. Way more than the beat down they got from Shinatobe.

Can’t wait to see if Dana gets Rahn’s ship working. Does PJ give up knowing they’ll die otherwise? In the escape, does John stumble upon Larn’s vats and discover a lot more nymphs (my pet theory)?

I’m eagerly awaiting the next few chapters.

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by Anonymous04/29/19

Wtf wow

Omg did not see this coming at all
Merci
Gracias
For another excellent read

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by BigDog16704/29/19

Arrrggggg!!!!

Who else wants to grab Tefler by the shoulders and shake the Hell out of him while screaming "Are the girls okay?"

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by Anonymous04/29/19

I can't even...

Avengers: Endgame, the Battle of Winterfell, and THIS cliffhanger all on the same day?..

I just can't anymore.

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by Anonymous04/29/19

RIP TSM

121 is probably an eulogy to let everyone guess their own ending.

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by Ambivalence04/29/19

Reasonably speaking, that should be the end of John and his...

With all of the stuff they were doing, they were only working at catching up...

But we just got shown they still weren't even closer to being in the same class and now they've got nothing...

You're going to have to pull multiple miracles out of your hat to have not just wasted half of this chapter building up the other nymphs and 119 other chapters building up John, his girls, and the Invictus...

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by Anonymous04/29/19

WTF

Endgame... Then this... Then GoT... God, This week has been a crazy bitch so far ....

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by cf1204/29/19

If you enjoyed this go show Tefler some love and join his Patreon. His next chapter is already posted there.

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by Anonymous04/29/19

I HATE YOU

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by Anonymous04/29/19

A few typos

Page 2:

Caught totally be surprise

she watched a broad variety of alien shipping rush (intended?)

Page 6:

Shall I give you full access to mind now

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by Anonymous04/29/19

Not the end ?

I am reading free here, so I have no idea on how this unfurls (awesome work btw !), but I have hopes for the team, here's why : (spoiler-y reflection, read the full chapter first !)

Well, first, the Doylist reason : there are a few chapters and monthes down the road, and heroes are heroes, so they should probably overcome this major hurdle...

Now, the Watsonian reasons : that fucker has John, true, but he just discarded all of his harem of brutally efficient matriarchs and wards, probably thinking they pack as much of a punch as his own thralls, and are therefore insignificant... Then John himself is stuck in the ship, and while not as much of a badass as other Progenitors in terms of technique, he has a fuckload of renewable energy ressources, starting with the Nymphs, Team Invictus and the Maliri. He is not as negligible as he once was. And there's still his guide lurking around in his mind, that guy will pack a punch if John gets knocked out... Finally, on the girls side, some of their abilities are unusual : Rachel's healing, Alyssa's progenitorness, Irilith's psy-hacking, Helene's empathy waves, Calara's foretelling etc... : the other Progenitor is not ready for this kind of unheard amongst his people abilities.

So I'd say they have a fair chance of at least saving themselves...

We'll see in about 10 days...

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by Anonymous04/29/19

You got telomeres wrong

I left a comment, chapter 42, it would be great if you corrected it for the book version.

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by ZZchromosome04/29/19

Jeepers, People, Relax

37 comments so far and you are all forgetting that Team Invictus still has a Progenitor to lead them - Alyssa. So on the ship, John goes to jail, meets his dad, learns some things, we hear some Evil Villain monologuing giving us insight into what's been going on, John meditates and defeats his guide. Outside the ship, Alyssa saves and rallies Team Invictus, then leads an unexpected counterattack to rescue John, John and his dad escape their cells in the confusion and we have a ship-wide Thrall vs. Enhanced Thrall and Progenitor vs. Progenitor battle. There you go, endgame all figured out.

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by Frika04/29/19

Resolution

Is it just me, or has everyone forgotten about the person most likely to help John unlock his full abilities. His guide locked away inside his mind.. perhaps they will work together , in a most unlikely scenario. Freedom for both of them. As for Dana, now she has all the technology she needs, like a massive jigsaw, now is the time for all the pieces to fall into place.
Cant wait for chapter 121, Bravo Master Teffler, I do hope the story is heading in the direction the leads and red herrings have seemed to go to. I have followed TSM from the time I first read chapter 1 and hooked me in. Now with the Nymphs reaching their desired forms, with jades tutelage, something different is arriving.. A standing round of applause Sir.. Take a bow Maestro. The next stanza should be most interesting...

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by WretchedMonkey04/29/19

Arrrghhh!!!

Why did you do this?!!! In one fell swoop, we have John's hopes dashed and then everything he has been working for just crushed and literally thrown away. And I thought it was going to be such a nice, touchy-feely chapter.

I don't know why I trust writers really, you want to believe in their work and world and get sucked in, mentally and emotionally and then just bash you in the head, break your heart and make you wait for the next chapter to see what happens. Well, fuck. I'm drained. And I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Because I'm a fucking masochist obviously....

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by hping04/29/19

MIssed it

Due to circumstances I missed it going live yesterday.

Tefler has left us some nice cliffhangers and some bones to gnaw on, and what a cliffhangers and bones they are.

Great installment of a masterpiece of a story.

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by Anonymous04/29/19

Okay WHAT THE FUCK

Damn Tefler you move fast!

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by Tefler04/29/19

Re: anon

Thanks for letting me know about the typos! I've fixed them in my master copy. :)

Tefler

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by Anonymous04/29/19

What a cliffhanger!

That ending, wow! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

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Holy fuck did not see that coming! (Literally!!)

Even though Dana just found the progenitor stealth tech, I too failed to make the jump to “Larnkelnar could be anywhere and we’d never know, he could even be watching us right now!” Rachel is the one who could be expected to make that leap, but perhaps she was still distracted with concern for John.
Holy crap Batman!

At least Larn continues to be caught in his paradigm of thralls being disposable and treats them with contempt, and judging by Jessica’s behavior, so does Rahn, not realizing John’s women are so much more than mere thralls. So now the women are stranded, but on a habitable planet, with a wrecked ship made of phsychic-shaped material and allies who can be called on telepathically. Edraele has probably dispatched the closest Maliri fleet already, even though John would not want anyone put in jeopardy for his sake.

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by Thitabe04/29/19

WTF

Y destroy the Invictus and kill off all of Johns girls? and for what? I'm all for cliff hangers but this is just stupid. I have no idea how you are going to be able to fix this, but this is a really messed up ending to this chapter. I'll read the next chapter when it's posted, but if you're just going to kill off everybody then after that I'm done reading this story.

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by Ultrafox6904/29/19

Arya Stark needed

Just like GoT the Nightking has arrived.

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by Anonymous04/29/19

Unexpected!

Wow, now I'm checking for updates by the hour. Just . . . wow . . .

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