by Kily
Nicely written and clear descriptions. Keep it up!!
Thanks for sharing.
Your writing kept me aroused . I hope you continue writing of this adventure.
Thanks for the comments!
I'll definitely be writing more, but I'm slow and English isn't my first language, so it might take a while...
Wow, really liked it. Can't wait to show it to my wife. I think that would be a way she could satisfy her bi-curiosity guilt free. Would like to read more and have Muri make her lick her ass!
One of the sexiest thing I've ever read. I've also read your sequel to this which is also great. Please could you write more especially with the humiliation.
if my best friend acted that way to me, she would soon be known as my X best friend
This is brilliant, I didn't even get to finish it as I had an orgasm that quickly. If someone did that to me I would not be happy as it's a bit rapey but I did like reading it knowing it's just a story. Good work.
Two of the more recent comments note that the forced action in this story is "a bit rapey" and would make the other woman "an x-friend." Even though it's supposedly made up, the undercurrent of meanness and coercion is unacceptable. You've got to conclude that the author is a male.
Such a devious and apparently delicious friend you have in Mira. We should all be so lucky!
Loved your story! Mwah!