by AlinaX
5 stars! Between the women, you've found a great place between domination and corruption. I like the foreshadowing of the transformation, but I'd love to see you draw out Ali's surprised enjoyment. The cumslut stuff is very welcome, especially so explicitly.
There were a couple of times I was confused about their positions during the oral sequences (and I loved them, please write more of them with or without non sequiters).
I'm really stoked there's a sequel, which I'm going to read now.
So glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you enjoy the others. Thanks for commenting - I think I can be a little hasty at times.