It is great to finally be writing. The stories I submit are real to the best of my memory. They come from a time in my life when my wife and I were younger. Though we have out grown that stage in our lives (she has not me), it is fun to look back and remember some of the fun times we had. I am a new writer and would love to see your comments on what I need to improve on so please, do your worse. I find writing supresses my desires and in turn, that makes my wife happy. I hope you enjoy and don't forget to vote.
Thank you