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People forget that they are reading free erotica and complain as if they are paying money to the authors to do better. Give me one reason why I should follow your advice? You're on the wrong site, dummy. Go watch YouTube. If you're looking for quality writing, then you're in the wrong...

Haha, I like to explore new ideas. I think it's better this way. Endings always disappoint readers. In this way, you can imagine the ending for yourselves. Just pick your role and imagine what could happen when you're trying to sleep. Don't think too much about sex stuff; otherwise,...

Good story. Lots of good sex!!!

But you need to have this story edited. Your spelling was pretty bad and it knocked away some of the hot sex.

Anticipating the next chapter

Love all the teasing

Thanks

I guess there ARE situations where murder / suicide is the best option.

would like to read more of this story

Very good

Totally enjoying this story

Wow, I'm just guessing but I think our main character is going to end up with 15 or 20 ladies by the time this story is done. I got a funny feeling lot of these ladies he's been meeting are going to end up with him. That would be extremely cool.

Great start

Reminds me when I worked out of town for 3 months years ago. Only then there was just snail mail. Lol

Hi Jayne, I loved this insight into how you transitioned from unhappily married woman to sexually comfortable one indulging in cybersex as a route to what I hope will be full (actual) sex with another person.

Your descriptive writing of how a woman feels during this period was first...

Elite means well beyond the standard fare, I have a category for the Elite stories. Your nom De plume takes up uses many spaces on said list!

I am a “hill William “ from west of AVL. I reside in Concord, you are one of the authors I would like to meet!

I am weird but not harmful....

Well this is a crazy good story and I simply can’t wait for chapter 3…a must read!

Awesome story!

I'll be checking out some of your other stuff.

Thanks for your writing,

5 stars for a very well written and mysterious story. Fabulous characters and premise, although the story went off in a direction I’m not sure I understand. I’m getting that he has been drinking Tara’s cum and it is changing him mentally and physically…am I reading science fiction...

This is so wrong, but it's also so right. A boy's first time should always be with his baby sister, and he should always take the risk of leaving a baby in her.

This sexy dialogue was fantastic. Five stars.

The best plague series I've read and as a retired Vet, I've read alot. I love it!

Well, I really enjoyed it and give it five stars. I expected them to part ways after her nursing gig ended. I thought the possibility of a reconciiation would be left to the readers imagination. The return of Lucinda surprised me..

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I'm REALLY liking this story!

Great characters and a storyline that has me locked in.

Q, you're one of the best authors here without a doubt.

wow. worth the length. thank you

I am so jealous that I could not share that with my mother ... dripping with milk and all 😛 ..

So glad you and the story are back! Your writing gets me hot.

Oh wow!!! A very wonderful start to a beautiful story

OK, this is an interesting kind of 'fucked up casual.'

I'm liking it. But the Colonel HAS to be up to more than just easy Dick.

5*

Read it again. It's a good story, but seeing and hearing is far worse than just knowing. That is a lot of pain to get past.

I think we can all feel for this guy. A technical note, giving his wife permission but reserving consequences was his way of letting her make the choice for him. Until his Vegas trip he really was not clear on his plan. I like how he just gets out of Dodge and gets her out of his...

You seem always to have this talent to make us believe we are right there with you when your story takes place. I love your stories, as I'm sure everyone does who reads them. Thank you for taking us on a fantasy trip that we can enjoy and get very aroused too. Thank you for being...

So very beautiful

NICE LOVE STORY......CINCO ESTRELLAS!

His honourable flabbiness! 😂😂😂😂

Some rushed story lines, but.. this one was close to working. Maybe a better he will write?

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

you should follow up and see how dad reacts. does like or is h appalled at what his son did for retaliation.