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by xelliebabex
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We have been truly blessed by your wonderful imagination and characters. I am sure that I will come back to these stories time and time again. I look forward to seeing your next project when you get round to it. Take care and hope you the best going forward.
Thank you
What a journey. Thank you for your work and effort - it has been a memorable journey.
Ellie, you are amazing. It has been wonderful following your 12 stories. They have brought so much to your audience and to reach the end is sad but in some ways fulfilling. Thank you for sharing your fantastic imagination and leading us through all 5he twists and turns. It really has been an honour to read your works. I look forward to your next adventures. Thanks again
I have read every single word you've posted here Ellie. And believe me when I say this, your words and the worlds you have created have given me home in most desparate times.
It has been a long road for you, your characters, and all your loyal readers. I have enjoyed the saga and want to thank you for sharing all your imagination and hard work with us. It has been an enjoyable ride. Congratulations for reaching the milestone and completing your story. Looking forward to your next venture and will be happy to see your name in the New Stories list once again. Thank you.
I never believed I would see the end of this tale. I never believed it would be so beautiful. Thank you Ellie!
Thank you once again for first building and then concluding another great experience that is the stories you have woven over the last 10 years!
I first discovered your bella series long ago and only recently got into the twelve tables franchise
Reaching the ending of each has always been a somewhat unpleasant experience as your thick tapastry of a world has provide such enthralling excitement, fear, sadness and of course lashing of lust ;)
I look fwd to whatever comes next
Fantastic series!! Kudos to you for developing such an original and rounded series. You are a phenomenal writer. One of the best. Love all your stories. Wish I could give it more than the 5 stars. All the best and I'll be looking out for your future works. :)
PS I'm still binge reading the previous table stories. They never get old
Happy and sad to see the 12 tables saga come to an end. I’ve enjoyed every chapter and delving into the stories and characters you’ve brought to life with your words. I’m looking forward to see what you have in store for us next.
Wow, Wow, Wow! What a fantastic world you created. I absolutely loved reading each and every chapter!
An amazing ending to a wonderful story. I look forward to whatever your newest creation will hold.
Thank you so much for the many hours of pleasure your stories have given us. It would be selfish of us to demand you continue forever (although tempting). It feels a bit like a death in the family, but thank goodness you are still very alive and have more tales in mind to make us laugh and cry again.
thank you for all this story and all the incredible stories you have written
That was a fantastic end to the story, you bring the characters to life in a unique way, which makes the whole thing more real. I will be waiting with baited breath for your next works. 5 stars doesn't do you justice!!
Ellie, well done! I am so happy you got to finish the twelve tables and get better healthwise. I fell everything that the most eloquent people have said and more. Thank you💕
It is truly an amazing accomplishment what you have achieved with your Tables stories. Thank you for the wonderful ending to the entire series. I look forward to reading your next story. Thank you.
Thank you for all the stories. They are so interesting. How do you keep them all sepaammazingrate, yet all together is so amazing.
Thank you again
I love the whole series and are in awe of any one as an author that can stay the course.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for bravely and generously sharing your stories and characters with us. I have loved each one dearly. ❤️
Thank you, it’s pretty humbling to sit back and see your dedication and talent spread out across the pages. Love the storyline.
Tess (uk)
thank you so much for the time and effort you've put into pleasing your readers over this sage. Have loved it all and now likely to start at the beginning again :) Not bad for an aussie!
Thank you Ellie - words I've written so often throughout the Twelve Tables journey. You created a timeless world within the Twelve Tables. Not just kink sex within this genre, but a real world, full of larger than life Doms, products of Pater Familias that stretched back through the centuries, together with subs whose stories and "adventures" (to put it no stronger!) matched, outstripped and confused and even angered the Doms.
Your imagination is limitless. The way you built each character - imbuing them with such reality that we laughed and cried with them. Loved and feared with them. Feared for them.
The vintage Table world is one that I have returned to, sometimes finding things I'd missed first time around. It is a world I shall return to again, that's for sure, and I love you for that.
Stay well please Ellie. Look forward to whatever you publish in the future.
Jules x
What an amazing journey you've taken us on Ellie. You transported us into an incredible world with amazing adventures. Thank you.
Thanks Ellie, well worth the wait. Have loved all of your stories, but these have special appeal. Good luck with your future adventures.
Ellie - I have been reading your stories for some time now, and they are amazing. You have show superb skills as a writer, building an incredibly captivating world. Thank you for the fine gift you have given us here. I know I will revisit the Twelve Tables often, and I look forward to your next creative endeavor.
5 *****s per chapter are not enough for this epic tale!
Thank you so much for this outstanding series. You went above and beyond
to finish it and are to be commended for doing so. You are a fabulous storyteller in a class by yourself!!! 😋
Can't believe I've reached the end. This was an awesome series. Thank you sharing your stories.
We complained about the plagiarism on Amazon and Goodreads and nothing was done. I made a last ditch effort by calling them out on their Facebook page on the 6th and again on the 9th of this month. I received the below reply on Wednesday. I checked both sites and Xelliebabex's books are gone just like they said. Piper320's book still on Amazon. Social media worked for the good this time. I notified our intrepid author by pm. Hopefully this makes her feel better...I know I do!
Hi Helen,
Thank you for your email, though we sincerely apologize for our delayed response. We are in the process of suppressing these books on Goodreads for violating our guidelines. Accordingly, the books will be removed entirely from Goodreads search results.
If you have any further questions or concerns, please let us know.
Sincerely,
The Goodreads Team
Ellie thank you for writing and finishing this story with everything that has happened to you. I have loved the table stories and hate to see them end, but I understand you want to do something new. If you write somewhere else will you put it on your Facebook page? I would not want to miss any of your stories.
Thanks again,
Jackie
Ellie, you have graciously shared your undoubted talent - many thanks for the hours of work you have given to provide pleasure to your followers. While I’m sad to read the final chapter of your ten year epic the stories are indeed exceptional. It’s great to see the comment below that your work plagiarised, by she who shall not be named, is being removed and hopefully the offender will receive some well deserved sanctions. Too little too late by far. I look forward to your sharing the next literary adventures. In the meantime stay safe and keep enjoying life.
Yeah! Well done Ellie, for winning November's Literotica Monthly Awards with this Chapter of The Twelve Zenati...
As always, wishing you good health, happiness and continued success for the year ahead.
May 2022 be a little kinder to us all.
Jules. x
What a journey! Well done. However - you never told us what happened to Dr. Pete Donati? Is he destined to be a bachelor forever? We need answers ;-)
Ellie,
Congrats on the Award for your epilogue. I am so happy for you. Although I joined your journey toward the ending of the serious, I am grateful you had enough trust in me to allow me to come along for ride. This is an epic series that is going down it Literotica history. Cheers until next time!!! Looking forward to 2022.
I must also add my thanks Ellie. I have been glued to my iPad for the last couple of weeks reading the 3 Tables stories, resenting anyone or anything that kept me from them. I will be keeping my eyes open for warrior types as I walk the streets of Canberra. I just know that I will be rereading all of them sometime soon. Xx
Initially, I was so sad to learn that Marcella couldn’t have children especially in families as child-centered and family-centered as the Tables, but then I’m grateful that you tackled this subject the way you did. Just a couple of days, a friend shared how adoption literally erased all the pain that she had from years of trying for biological children and it is all but forgotten. It’s not just your plots and your sex scenes that are moving, but the way you embrace people and characters. Thank you!
Wow, just wow.
Thank you for continuing with this series through all of your ups and downs.
And finally, wow.....
Wow Ellie ive loved the whole series, especially because I’ve live in a few of the places you mention in your books, especially Darwin. Sorry you had to dumb it down for those who don’t understand our aussie language. I cant wait to see what you come up with next, Sincerely, Jann
All this for this ending..... ridiculous waste of writing and no i do not appreciate it one bit.......... this is dumb.
Finally finishing this amazing series and feeling a bittersweet joy. I have been reading this series off and on for years and they are like a comfort for me. I have been in a reading slump for almost five years and yet your stories enticed me to re-read all three instalments within a month. Ellie, thank you for sharing your skill and creating these worlds where you can’t help but get sucked in! I know I’ll have a comfort to return to whenever I so choose 💕💕
Thank you and Brava! You never disappoint. While I am so very bummed that I will never again hear about the many characters I’ve grown to love in the world of the Twelve Tables or hear the stories of those who were only supporting cast, I anticipate with baited breathe the next world you create. Thank you!!!
I’ve really enjoyed all your stories that I’ve read. (So far the Tables, Bella, and Cities of Power stories.) I’m in the US, and have appreciated the Australian ‘flavor’. I’ve looked up and learned about Aussie places, events, and slang with enjoyment as I read. I’ve also enjoyed the female and (I believe) submissive author’s viewpoint.
I hope the best for your future health and happiness, and time to write more stories for us to enjoy. (Perhaps completion of the Cities of Power too. :) )
This is the second time that I have read the Twelve Tables series an I am sure that I will read it again. What a wonderful piece of writing. Thank you Ellie
Excellent story. You are a wonderful writer and have a gift for keeping your audience entertained. Keep up the good work Ellie.
Thank you. Right up there with favourite ever reads, including books which I have read A LOT of. The Tables series is a perfect blend of character development, storyline, drama and the icing on the cake, all that sex and exploration of Dominant/submissive, a great insight into BDSM practiced intelligently