All Comments on 'Taking Charge Pt. 01'
by redskyes
- 17 Comments
Jake has been disrespectful before he moved in with Ryan and Becca. Becca was too and still is. I don't understand why Ryan let Jake treat his home like a whore-house. If Jake cared anythng about their friendship he wouldn't have a constant parade of girls in and out of a house that he is a guest in. Is Jake looking for more employment? I don't see him moving out now that he can screw around and have Becca too.
Ryan has a submissive type personality so I don't see him saying anything for now. I just hope Ryan isn't the type to watch his wife carry on affair with Jake while he gets his rocks off on it.
Very well written, drawing the reader in, the scenes really had me going......but at the end of the day its just going to end up another frigging cuck story, another bloody lil dick hubby gettin hard watchin a cheating wife and a betraying asshole of a friend........bleh
"at the end of the day its just going to end up another frigging cuck story, another bloody lil dick hubby gettin hard watchin a cheating wife and a betraying asshole of a friend"
Actually, not in the slightest. Personally, I despise those kinds of stories. No way I would write one.
"you posted under the wrong category, need to change category to Loving Wives"
I strongly disagree.
say erotic is something else and bullshit is too. wrong place, not even loving wives fit and there is no garbage categorie so far. And why would you make it a long story ? you already said everything there is to say after 2 pages.
yes make it short and spare us the rest.
I have had the pleasure of reading (and editing) the whole story, so Red knew how the reactions might turn out, bcause I felt exactly the same. But this is not your typical, obvious collection of sex scenes or the nth version of "Cuckold 101". I won't spoil anything, just believe me when I say you WILL be surprised. This is easily on par, if not better than anything Red has published here. I oughta know :-)
Not what I normally read, but very erotic. Trying hard not to be bad is something that
most of us can understand. Maybe the readers who think it is the same as all of the others should remember they are reading for enjoyment. Relax and enjoy the hard work that was put into the story
Thanks for the submission. I will look for more chapters from you
Disregard the haters, I've read your other stories and I have a feeling this would be great one, and as far from the staple cuckold stories as possible. Thank you and looking forward to the rest!
Holy shit that was good. I guess it was twice as hot for me because my husband's best friend (at least one of his best) moved in with us around 6 months ago. So you can guess how its been for me. Luckily my husband more than satisfies. But this was still undeniably hot. Thank you, and I definitely hope you keep up the good work on this series and the next... and the next. ;)
I love the anticipation you built up. And their bathroom scene was incredibly sexy. Great chapter.
and since you say it's not a cuck story and that you'd never write one this is some type of setup by the hubby or something. I don't see how that changes the fact that his wife is betraying him with his best buddy, but I'll keep reading to see if this resolves in any kind of satisfactory way.
Just as I started reading this, the song Red Skies at Night (by The Fixx) came on the radio. Nice, the way you made that happen.
This first chapter in what is a powerful psychological drama is a gripping read from start to finish. Complex interrelationships, strong characters, and great writing are standouts, and the romantic scenes not only add to the plot but are integral to it. Superb storytelling in every way. Five stars.