by Kveldulf
O my effing gee. I wish I could give twenty stars; I’m seeing stars. Bravo!
.....at myself. Because I can detest the brutality and callousness of the fictional relationship using the same voice with which I can applaud the craftsmanship of the writing. Thanks....I think.
I came down this site for the sex.
This was great.
Wish I could do that.
Bob
Power games, a little role playing, and some nice cutting dirty talk. My kind of story. And as Vix pointed out, bonus points for writing the whole thing as dialogue. Really nice.