Let's Make a Deal Ch. 01

Dave didn't know what he was doing sitting at the bar. He didn't really like drinking. But he just didn't want to go straight home. Work provided some distraction from his thoughts. But other than work tomorrow, nothing was expected of him. He knew that he would be hit with a crushing loneliness as soon as he got back to his empty apartment. A place he used to consider home. But lately it has felt like a mausoleum for a dead relationship.

Dave and Ashley were a bit of an odd couple. Ashley was confident, sexy, and a bit out of Dave's league. Still, Dave never expected to walk-in on her with his best friend. It's only been a week, but he must have replayed the scene a thousand times...

Dave usually gets home around 6 on weekdays. But on this particular day he was out of the office to meet a vendor. The meeting was close to his apartment, so he thought he'd surprise his girlfriend by bringing her lunch. He knew she had the day off and would probably be home.

At first he was annoyed to find a car in his spot. But then, he realized, he knew this car. A silver Maxima with a Seahawks decal in the rear window, it was Steve's, his best friend.

Dave parked his car in the visitor lot and made his way to his apartment.

He reached the door and found it slightly ajar. He heard a *pop* followed by a groan. He stopped moving.

*sluuuurrrp slurp slurrp*

"Oh fuck baby. You are so good at that."

It was Steve's voice. Dave felt ill. No way he was hearing what he thought he was hearing. He put his finger tips on the door and slowly pushed it open.

Dave couldn't believe what he was seeing. There was Steve, standing in his kitchen, naked. And on her knees right in front of him knelt Ashley, hands on his ass, forcing her mouth full of cock. Steve's back was to Dave and Dave couldn't see Ashley's face, but he recognized her nail polish. Dave could clearly hear her gagging.

*gasp*

"Fuck I love your big dick!"

It was definitely Ashley's voice, but Dave had never heard her talk like that.

"Mmm I'm going to cum." Steve groaned.

"Cum in my mouth, I wanna swallow it." Ashley purred.

"What the fuck!" Dave thought. "She never swallows!"

"Oh fuck! Ungh! Ungh! Unghhhh!"

Dave dropped the bag of deli sandwiches.

Steve jumped and turned around, his thick cock still dribbling cum. And on her knees, a very stunned Ashley with mouth closed tight and cum dripping down her chin.

They all looked at each other for a moment before any one spoke. Dave looked at Steve who was still reeling from orgasm. Then he looked down at his dick. It was like a beer can. "Did he fuck her with that thing?" he thought. Then he looked at Ashley, visibly upset, and not sure what to do with all the cum in her mouth.

"Look, uhh-" Steve started in, but stopped when Ashley put her hand on him.

*gulp*

"I'm so sorry Dave! It kinda just happened!" Ashley pleaded.

"Yeah bro, she still like, loves you man." Steve tried to compose himself.

Ashley started to cry, but it was clear that her mascara had already been running.

Dave turned around. "Sorry!" And walked out.

"Sorry? What the fuck Dave!" he thought.

Dave left in a hurry and went back to work. By the time he got home, Ashley was gone.

He thought he might be getting over it, but then he got a text from her, asking if she could come by tomorrow and grab the rest of her things. He knew seeing her again would be painful and he was dreading it. He sat alone at the bar, with a rum and coke, trying to numb a little bit of his anxiety.

"Is this seat taken?"

Dave looked to his right. She stood about 5'3", with a small perky frame. She wore slacks and a tasteful blouse. Her hair was blonde with a bob cut. Her sparkling green eyes held very direct eye contact. Her skin was glowing. She had attractive but approachable features.

Dave looked around. The bar was empty, save the inattentive bartender.

"Sure."

"Great!" She pulled out her stool and took a seat.

The bartender walked up and asked,

"What can I get you?"

"Blood and sand."

"I know that one."

She turned back to Dave. And starred intently.

"Uhh, put it on my tab!" Dave managed a tight smile as he looked at his new companion.

"Change can be painful right?" She finally said.

"Change?" Who was this women?

"I have a certain... knack for reading people. You look like a man going through change, a painful one at that."

"Well...I've been better I guess." Dave let out a nervous laugh.

"However, change offers opportunity. Opportunity to take stock of what you have and use it to elevate, and..." her eyes dropped to Dave's lap, and her lip curled into a smirk "...to grow."

Dave shifted in his seat. The bartender delivered the drink. "Cheers." And went back to watching one of the TV's.

The woman extended her drink to Dave's.

"Abi."

"Dave." They clinked there glasses and took a drink. "So I guess your business is related to opportunity?"

Abi broke into a big smile. "Why yes!"

"Look, I'm not sure who you think I am, but I'm not really looking for a therapist."

Abi's smile faded. "I'm a broker, actually. And a rather successful one."

"A broker? Sorry I thought-"

"Don't you get tired of saying sorry Dave?"

Dave did his best to hide his shock, but it was written all over his face.

Abi's smile returned, only this time it carried a hint of cruelty.

"Hey look, I'm sor-" He stopped himself. "I guess I just thought what I said was uncalled for. I shouldn't jump to conclusions. I guess I'm just stressed out."

Abi continued to stare. He was finding her too intimidating to maintain eye contact.

"You've got a lot of potential, actually." She finally spoke. "You know with my help, you could be a... big deal."

"With your help? Are you a broker or a life coach?" Dave tried to sound more confident.

"I'm definitely more of a broker." Abi swirled her drink. "You invest with me and you'll see incredible returns."

Dave looked down. "I'm not exactly swimming in capital."

Abi looked at him and smiled. "Actually Dave, I'm very familiar with your assets and, to me, your partnership is very attractive."

Dave blushed. Why is this beautiful woman flattering me like this?

Abi reached over and let her delicate finger trace Dave's arm. He felt his heart leap.

"Wealth, Power, Vitality..." She glanced at his crotch. "Virility."

"What is happening right now?" Dave leaned back.

Abi broke out in a laugh, nearly falling off her stool. Dave was very aware that her hand now rested on his arm.

"Hahaha! Excuse me. I'm aware that this pitch is a bit much. But-" Her smile faded. "It IS true. I can deliver."

"Okay..." Dave was starting to wonder if he was talking to a lunatic. "So you do these things, but not for money?"

"My firm rarely expects money. We're far more interested in... commodities." She smiled mischievously.

"And you think I have-" Dave started.

"Look Dave! Let's make a deal!"

She turned, put her hand on his thigh, and leaned in. Dave felt her hot breath on her neck. She breathed into his ear

"I'll make you rich and powerful. I'll even make your cock huge. I like sucking the bigger ones anyway."

Dave turned red and his pulse started racing. His dick instantly got hard. He thought about Steve's big dick fucking his girlfriend. The incredible envy. Then he thought of Abi, sucking him off.

He turned to look at Abi. She was biting her lip.

"You see Dave." She glanced around her, then moved her hand to the side of her mouth and whispered, "I'm a devil."

Her sparkling green eyes appeared to glow for a moment.

Dave looked at her, mouth agape, and took her in. Her blouse seemed to have unbuttoned without him noticing. Her creamy skin breathed underneath. Her nipples were hard, clearly poking out of the delicate fabric. She had a desperate submissive look, like she needed to be touched. Dave gulped.

"So commodities means... you want my soul?" Dave could hardly believe what he was asking.

Abi's grin was big and beautiful, showcasing her perfect teeth. "Yes that's right! You get to keep it though, until... you know. But we do offer management positions to our top performers!"

She leaned back on her stool with her hands behind her head. "How do you think I got this sweet job?"

"I don't even know what a soul is."

"Dave there are literally trillions of them. And very few people get a chance to use theirs like this." She leaned in and spoke softly. "I know you Dave, I know the life I can give you. I want you."

Dave gulped. Abi looked down at the tent in his lap and smiled. "Seems like you want me too."

"...Can I think about it?"

Abi's smile faded. She turned back to her drink, picked it up and finished it. She hopped off her stool and gathered her things. Dave looked on, feeling a sense of regret.

She handed him a business card. "I expect to hear from you soon." And she walked out the door. Dave couldn't help but notice her perfect ass swaying in her slacks. And just like that, she was gone.

Dave sat stunned on his stool for what seemed like forever. He looked at the card Abi gave him.

"Abidon & Partners LLP, A Division of Inferis Law Group" The back had a number, handwritten.

"666"

Dave jumped when his phone started to ring. It was Steve. He hadn't talked to him since that day. He thought about ignoring it, but it was one of the few friends he had, and he needed to talk to someone.

"Hello." Sounding annoyed.

"Hey man! I wasn't sure you'd pick up."

"Yeah."

"Look man... I just wanted to call and apologize."

Dave sighed.

"I just- You see, she came on to me. I shoulda said no. I know that! But she started DMing me, talkin bout how she heard how big my dick is -I mean you saw it Haha! She was sending me pics of her titties and ass, telling me she needed to get fucked by a real man... And... well... It wore me down man and... well... I'm sorry. I wanted to tell you after the first time, but she said it was a bad idea."

"First time!?" Dave stammered.

"Oh yeah bro, sorry. This has been goin on for... well... since... well, she just blew me the first time. That was Valentine's Day. You were at work. And then we started fucking shortly after that."

"Valentine's Day?!"

Dave hung up the phone. Today was the first day of August. Dave started doing math. Then he thought about the times Ashley seemed out of sorts without explanation. He thought about the times she didn't want to have sex. He wondered how much of his relationship was real or imagined. He felt like he couldn't breathe.

He did his best to hold back his tears.

He gulped down his drink. Dave looked at Abi's card, picked up his phone, took a deep breath, and punched in the numbers.

*ring*

*ring*

The reciever picked up.

"Well hello Mr. Freed. Seems you've made up your mind rather quickly."

"I, uhh... I guess I shouldn't be surprised you know my last name?"

"What? You doubting I'm real deal?"

"No! I'm sor- ...I thought about what you said. I think it's just what I need!"

"Excellent! You're is going to be so happy with your decision! I'll draft the contract and meet you in an hour at the W Hotel lobby. I'll see you at the bar."

Dave walked into the hotel looking nervous and a little sloppy. He had to rush and cleverly navigate to reach the place. It was clear on the other side of the city in rush hour. He had barely time to think about what he would do with his new powers. But he knew one thing, he wasn't going to take any shit from Ashley or Steve. They were gonna be... sorry? He wasn't sure how he wanted them to be yet actually. But knew he wasn't going to take their shit! Or whatever...

Dave found his way to the bar. A hand reached up and signaled him. It was Abi. Her outfit had changed. She wore a gorgeous red evening gown that highlighted her curves and athletic shape. Abi's blonde locks were woven into a long french braid that reached her ass. How the fuck did her hair grow so fast? Dave wondered.

"I'm glad you finally made it."

"Yeah S-"

Abi's eyebrow raised. She looked stunning. Her makeup was just enough to highlight her femininity while letting her natural radiance shine through.

"I'm here now!" Dave managed to sound confident.

"Yay!" Abi beamed, making Dave blush.

Dave took a seat next to her. There was already a glass of brown liquor waiting for him. He took a sip and turned to notice Abi was biting her lip. He thought about her casually mentioning her love to suck big cock. Dave started to get hard.

"So where do I sign?"

Abi opened her brief case and produced a tablet. Dave didn't recognize the brand. The case was red and sparkling, and the top was adornded with two plush devil horns.

"Just a squiggle at the bottom is fine."

Dave took the tablet and started to scroll. 1001 pages?! Dave started to wonder what he was getting into, wondering if he'd regret it. He turned back to Abi looking a bit overwhelmed.

Abi was leaning towards him, her eyes doughy, her cheeks reddened. She also seemed unaware or unconcerned that one of her nipples had slipped into view. It was pink, with a big areola. And it was very erect.

"Come on, it'll be fun." She mewed. "...and we'll forward a copy to your email, if you really want to get into the details."

Dave gulped and turned back to the tablet.

"Affidavit for release of soul in exchange for services rendered on corporal plane"

Dave started to read the text, but he could barely make sense of it. It was a complex mix of legal jargon and Latin maybe? He started scrolling faster, skimming as much as he could stand. He saw mention of monetary payment, health benifits, and penile 'boosting.' He finally reached the bottom and found the signature line.

"Right here?" Dave asked. He turned to look at Abi. She was practically salivating. She offered a nod. Dave tried to be polite, but couldn't stop himself from stealing another glance at Abi's nipple. Fuck she is so hot!

Dave took a deep breath and signed the line with his finger. He returned the tablet to a very happy Abi.

"Alright! What's next?!" Dave realized he would probably know if he actually understood the contract.

Abi offered a genuine laugh. "Eager are we? Well the deal has been signed, but it needs to be sealed. Let's take this upstairs shall we."

Abi returned the tablet to her briefcase. She got up and started to saunter towards the elevator. Dave got up quickly to follow, nearly colliding with someone as he pushed out his stool. He hurried after her. He reached the elevator just as the doors started to close.

They started going up. They were alone.

"Deals like these require a sealing ritual." Abi offered. "These rituals vary broker to broker. I usually prefer a kiss."

Dave started to blush. He looked at Abi. She was so beguiling. He closed his eyes and leaned in for a kiss. But he felt a hand on his chest stop him in his tracks.

"Patience! Hahaha! You're lucky I like you! I have something I think you'll like much better in store!"

*Ding*

The elevator doors opened, not to a hallway, but a sprawling penthouse. Abi stepped out, Dave followed right behind. Her ass swayed seductively in her evening gown. Her back was exposed, and the fabric hung just low enough to get a glimpse of the top of her ass crack.

"Yes, this will do!" Abi exclaimed.

They stood in a large living room, with a commanding view of the city. They looked out for a moment before Abi spoke.

"As I was saying. I usually like to seal the deal with a kiss, but..."

Dave turned to look at her. She was beaming. Her green eyes sparkled. Her cheeks blushed.

"How about I suck your cock instead."

She looked down at his crotch. He was visibly tenting his pants.

"Does that sound good?"

"Uhh sure. Ok!"

Abi giggled and set her brief case down and knelt on the Oriental rug in front of Dave.

She offered a teasing lick through the outside of Dave's slacks. Holy shit! This is happening!

"Let's see what we're working with."

Abi unzipped Dave's slacks while biting her lip. She grabbed the waistband of his underwear and pulled them to his ankles. His hard cock sprung out. He was rock solid. Abi giggled again.

"Oh not bad. You've got a pretty cock."

She reached into her brief case and produced a roll of measuring tape.

She held the tape across the top of his cock. Her touch made Dave twitch and a bead of precum formed at his tip.

"Let's see here... 5...and a quarter inches... and around we have...4 and three quarters."

Abi looked up at Dave. "Mmm I wonder how much bigger you'll get."

Dave didn't say anything. He knew how big he was. He was just happy to have this beautiful girl handle his cock.

"Are you ready? Once I take you in my mouth, the pact will be sealed."

Abi stuck her tongue out to catch a drop of hanging precum. Her eyes lit up as she savors the flavor.

"Mmmm"

"Oh fuck yes! Suck me Abi! Please!"

Abi smiled and grabbed hold of Dave's twitching cock. She held it up and put her tongue on Dave's balls.

"Oh fuck!" Dave groans.

Abi tenderly licks his sack for a moment before running her tongue from the base of his shaft to the tip. She lets his cock rest there as she gives him a wink. Abi, slowly but deliberately, took Dave's cock into her mouth, all the way to the base.

The sensation felt incredible. Abi kept the whole dick in her mouth while giving quick little sucks and flicking Dave's balls with her long tongue. Dave felt like he kept getting harder. He didn't understand that was possible, considering how hard he was to start. Abi's mouth felt wet, warm, tight... and getting tighter!

He heard Abi start to gag, but she wouldn't back off the cock. Dave also was becoming aware of her teeth, gently scraping his dick. Abi started gagging more, tears started streaming down her cheeks. Her mascara was running.

Dave felt his cock throbbing in Abi's mouth. "Oh fuck! That's so good!"

Abi was choking and gagging on his cock, when she started to make sounds like she was distressed. Abi reached around and put her hands on Dave's ass. Dave could feel her pulling herself down on to him.

Dave looked down and couldn't believe his eyes. Abi no longer had his entire cock in her mouth. She had atleast three inches of shaft exposed. And the girth! His cock looked unbelievably thick. Abi was still pulling herself down onto him, now with great determination. Her sparkling green eyes were dulling and rolling into the back of her head. She stopped making any noise for a moment and just held there.

*coulch!*

*clough! congch!*

*Slluurrrrrp- gasp*

Abi felt her throat relax as it was no longer full of Dave. After leaning back far enough she let Dave free of her mouth. She felt her jaw relax, as it was no longer pushed to the limit.

*cough! cough!*

"Oh fuck! God damnit!" Abi seemed a little disappointed in herself. But her frustration quickly faded as she stared at Dave's cock. Her eyes belied a sense of intimidation.

Dave, however, looked completely stunned. That's my cock!? He was massive, pointing straight out and covered in bulging veins. It was bigger than anything he had seen in porn. It looked excessively long and stupid thick.

"Wow Dave! I knew you would get a big one. But this... this is truly special. Your soul must have a great deal of potential!"

"Oh my God this is awesome!"

Abi chuckled, "He's not your God anymore. But yeah, this is exceptional!"

Abi's hungry eyes light up with excitement. "Let's measure it now!"

Abi grabbed the measuring tape, pausing for a moment to greedily lick up the precum dripping from Dave's fat tip. Her eyes go wide as she takes her measurement.

"Thirteen inches! 13! I was betting you'd get a healthy 9 inches! But 13! God damn!"

Abi wrapped the tape around the middle of Dave's shaft, where he was thickest.