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- His Little Kitten Ch. 01
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All Comments on 'His Little Kitten Ch. 01'
by RememberEntropy
- 25 Comments
Feeling utterly sickened by this. It should be in Fetish (with a strong warning) or maybe horror. I fail totally to see enything erotic in this enforced, unwilling mutilation and destruction of a sentient human being. Even if such twisted medical proceedures were possible, (and thankfully they aren't), the poor victim's mind would snap like a twig at such an abhorrent and gross violation. I won't be reading any more of this story. I also wish I could unsee what I have just read.
That was one of the most disgusting things I have ever read in my life. You also obviously have no knowledge of medicine or science at all. You have to be really messed up to even think of something like this.
they've already deleted my comment left before the two on now
it is terrible and i do hope they do not continue to write
This was extremely disturbing. Nightmares for days.
Do you write for American Horror Story? You should.
this is terrifying and I never want to read it again.
That said, you may have a basis for a quality horror novel if you made people come to pity and understand the kidnappers. Make readers question what truly is normal and beautiful.
If you don't like it. Don't read it! Please don't stop your story it is very intriguing. This obviously fantasy. I am very interested in learning more about the new "kitten" meeting her Master and their relationship.
Yes it was lil disturbing but I still would like to see where the story goes :)
This was the second most fucked up thing I've ever read...and I can't wait to read more. If you ever get too much hate here, try ASSTR. They have a much bigger variety of subject matter.
To everyone who said I should stop writing, thank you. I was going for shock factor. But hey, listen, my fetish, not yours. I will keep on loving it even if you don't.
Also, I did originally have it in the non-con section but somehow it got changed. This is my first story, so Im still figuring things out.
Um? People are saying Ive deleted feedback and I swear I havent... I told you guys I wanted to hear it all. Good and bad. I know. Im messed up. I dont understand science very well.
It started off ok and the modification actually wasn't to bad if you had just left it at the cat tail and ears, those would actually be pretty neat. Honestly I've actually fantasized about what it would be like to have a cat tail and cat ears. But then you took it a step to far for me personally the sawing off fingers and legs and replacing it with cat booties? Eww I think the girl would have been cuter as a Neko girl instead of a human cat that walks on four legs (sounds creepy and makes me think of a horror film if you ask me). But of course that's my personal opinion. Interesting idea though! =)
I don't know why the hell I like this but I do, so please don't stop!
This should:
1) Be listed in Non-consent and
2) Have a MAJOR trigger warning. Like amputation, gore, or simply creepy medical procedure.
Please please please continue. I really want to see in which direction you're taking the story
I have a bit of a hard time imagening how her legs is supposed to work.. And i wish the ears whould work cause that's just cute!
I really really like this idea and i hope you continue with lots more chapters!! Update soon please ❤️❤️
I'm wondering if these modifications are medically accurate? The legs and the paws got me there for a second. But the whole modification process does bring a realistic flair to the story, which I quite like.
Please will you continue this I wish to know what happens next your a good writer and I'm looking forward to future writing's from you even if it isn't on this story :)
Please please please keep going im dying to see what happens in her future!!!
to have your fingers sawed off with your legs in a position were you would never be able to walk again.
At first this story seemed interesting--an adventure with an abduction and being forced into pet play, it seemed exciting. Once she started getting altered, however, it made me want to stop reading. It is almost too gruesome and makes the story seem a lot less realistic. Also, I would like to read more about bondage, so instead of being surgically transformed, they could have used bondage to force her into pet play.