All Comments on 'Helping My Wife's Friend'
by Jeff0880
- 13 Comments
i can't think of a single redeeming feature to this "story". Fortunately it was short.
Let’s not tell my wife or your fiancé that you’re a cheating whore and I’m an asshole. That meets Lue’s criteria for an innocent, playful, recreational, tryst.
But maybe you should have put this in the incest category instead. At one point you said you accidentally screwed your wife's mother in law. So wouldn't that be your mom?
Sounds like married fun to me, plus there's the humanitarian angle. Poor girl was going out of her mind so he did the decent thing and helped her out. One of my favorite fantasies. There have been a few of my wife's friends who I would have helped out if only the opportunity had come up.
You complainers should just go back to sucking lemons.
R.
She's my ex-wife now, but she was my wife at the time of the story. Not because of this event though, that was a whole other thing. The story about my mother in law is in the incest/taboo category, Jenny wasn't related to either of us so that's why this one isn't there.
This is only erotic coupling story. No real LW content worth bothering with.
You put unnecessary information in the story that just makes the plot look messy. Eg saying ex wife when she is wife at the time of the story, then mentioning sex with your wife's MIL.
Not sure why the wife's friend didn't just get a new boyfriend. You never explained the obvious.
The description for LW said extramarital, which this event was, that's why I put it there, but it seems most people expect that to include the couple and others, maybe erotic couplings would have been a better choice.
She didn't get a new boyfriend because she was still going out with the Todd, he was working abroad, he worked at some resort on a Spanish island. It's in the story, I didn't go to far into the details of it to avoid identifying people, I changed their names too for the same reason.
The MIL reference was merely to explain any potential inconsistency with the previous story. We weren't having much sex at that the time of that story, it had picked up a lot since, it tailed off again though unfortunately. Plus I suppose it was intended as a bit of a plug to the previous story. I don't think I really added anything that wasn't somehow relevant, I wanted to keep it to one page, I prefer the shorter stories, the ones where it takes 3 or 4 pages to get to the action tend to bore me.
I said ex-wife in the first paragraph to point out that we have since divorced, not really a necessary fact, but I wanted to put it out there. After that I only said wife because at the time she was.
Bored today, so checking back on things.
Now I know why it was hard to understand your story, it was a sequel according to your response. Try using chapter or part numbers with the same title name for story series.
Otherwise your response just made it more confusing.