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by Just Plain Bob
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This is a first for me with one of your stories. Either I really hate them, or I really like them. This is one that for the first time made sit on the fence and I couldn't make up my mind one way or the other.
Well I did and didn't like the story. But it was a good read.
your stories tell your hate for women.in all your stories there is need for mental health specialist.
Two stories with husbands that have backbones? Two stories that don't have husbands beating off to the thought of their wives cheating on them? Once again, I have to thank you for the effort you took in writing this story.
This time when the sanity went away it was almost 3/4 of the way into the story when he had his boss fuck his whore wife - then down into unrealityville with stupid sick attempts at erotic or sensual pictures.
Lets think about it - he makes her fuck lotsa cock to get even with her so he can't kick her out and not get any puzzy himself - and stays pissed at her for what she did and what he makes her do and -------does this seem like a bloody fuck circle or what Bobbie - splain it please so I don't think you have lost it????
Sad and Puzzling or is it just consistantly weird Bobbie
Bob, you are a sick motherfucker. Just like the assholes that like this shit.
Just Plain Bob, you're just plain grasping for story lines. This offering was just plain stupid and evidence of you not being in touch with reality ... not even close to anything like reality. Get help and stop writing until you do. You're have a truly ill mind.
You had to have been drunk to come up with a story like that. So unreal, so disbelievable, so sick.
One of those guy she is fucking with your assistance needs to knock her up.
but not very erotic. As a revenge story it is unrealistic because all she had to do is get him on tape coercing her into these acts. I do not know why he is not in jail because the husband is usually who they go after on these type of assaults. Why didn't they go after him for beating them up? After six months of being a whore she is too dumb to figure out that he will never take her back.
Basically, a nice male fantasy!
SleeplessinMD
This is unbelievable. Why would he consider keeping a public convience in his house sheltered under his name? In the newar future he will be spending money for AIDS treatment plus at least one of the uncureable STD strains.
His brother needs to be told of Ann's complicity in his "wife's" sexual history including the night she stayed for a gangbang. Ann is probably getting action on her own.
Fred needs to cut his losses and put his "beloved wife" out on the streets where she belongs. A little more backbone for Fred please.
One seldom finds an author who has a character commit criminal acts - and pimping out one's wife is criminal - with no sense of wrongdoing. I suspect this reflects the author's own lack of insight as to what is, and is not, permissible in this society
Why? Because the story is FICTION. The story was interesting, different, fun in a perverse way. Since Bess was carrying on with the 3 guys way past that first incident----and that long-lasting gangbang affair is absurd in real life---it is only natural that Fred did a little knee dislocations.
You shouldn't get any complaints. If readers don't know your themes they never will.
dg
Not sure how somethinglike this even comes close to erotic. Quite the opposite.
Nothing fancy or deep here. It is however, a little more interesting than your usual offering
Bob, just one word to say to you about this story........(FANTASTIC)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Paul
Great job, as long as the Husband doesn't weaken and actually places his cock into that walking lab culture!
Great job, as long as the Husband doesn't weaken and actually places his cock into that walking lab culture!
The wife was a ho, but hubby's behaviour by far surpassed hers! He should have charged for pimping her out...
who knows what a person would do if betrayed.some are weak and do nothing,but there is a few who you don't fuck with.this was one of the few times they ask for what they got.ladies and gentlemen you can read and enjoy a whore of a wife fuck over her hubby and that alright.but when a husband gets revenge,he a bad person or that to rough.i got two words for you fuck you.
Too bad this author does not write more "non-wimp" husband stories on a more frequent basis.
Only problem with this story is the terminology...his wife was a slut not a whore...whores charge for it and she gives it up for free.
In addition to working over the knees of the three strippers, he should have added one more lick with the bat...right to the nose of each one...as hard as he could swing...Thanks.
she continues to service the men he brings and says she is sorry. a cynic would say that she doth protest too much, where she smiles with each new guy. it works out, husband has no other expectations for her and he did not fold and found a solution that works for him.
she understands the things to do to 'fix' things, and is apparently enjoying the process. a punishment she can get into. put an end to the charade
One of the few JPB non-wimp stories - so enjoy!
I think she went with the three guys willingly too and probably a little drunk, helps make the decision to cheat a little easier.
Getting home and realizing she can be forgiven, the true slut emerges and now sober disrespect for her husband.
After making her a whore for his friends and clients, he should take her out, dressed cheap, for dinner, slip her a little ecstacy and leave her in an interracial club where he has a detective and cameras ready. It's hard to divorce someone you really loved but you can't live with a disrespecting slut that just fucks you over. It'll always hurt but she has to go. Years of love and trust gone but, this is who she really was, he shouldn't have to pay to keep her in her desired lifestyle!
A good story, why kick the slut to the curb when he can help his business with pimping her out, after all she's just a whore a heart.
Thanks Bob, it's a good read
First the following is false: "As drunk as she was the rape charge would never stick." Bottom line, if a girl is intoxicated she cannot consent to sex and the guys could be charged with rape. It does not matter whether they knew she was intoxicated, it doesn’t matter if they were intoxicated too, all that matters is that she was not in a state of mind to consent and therefore it is rape. If a guy gets a girl drunk or high and then “gets together” with her he has committed a sexual assault. Again, it doesn’t matter if he is drunk or high as well. The guy's diminished abilities do not negate his responsibilities.
Second, he could not attack three men, send them to the hospital, and not go to prison. Especially since all three fucked his wife, he had them fired, and had the report from the detective agency. In a court of law that is proof beyond a reasonable doubt and that is how the judge would instruct the jury. Even is he could prove he was somewhere else, he would be convicted of conspiracy. Even if, against all odd, he wasn't convicted, all three would sue him for millions of dollars with the much lower standard of just a weighing of the evidence they would win and he would be forever broke and allowed to keep no more than 25% of his wages.
Finally, no husband is going to have his wife fuck men unless it is for money and he is her pimp. Furthermore, she would refuse and divorce his ass, collect alimony and at least half the assets.
The story is impossible on so many issues, it deserves the lowest rating.
OK, this story is really fucked up. One thing might have made it a little better. I cannot understand all of the authors who write crap like this and never have the husband ask the burning questions. I am not saying that the answers would have had any bearing on the events, but damn, wouldn't inquiring minds want to know. Did she leave from the party willingly or was she in fact too drunk to know what was happening? If willingly, was that the first time? If not, why the affairs? If she loved her husband, why cut him off? The story would have been marginally better if these questions had been asked and answered. Not doing that make me think the author was just being lazy. Come on JPB, you can do better.
And why take the risk she gets pregnant or catches some nasty disease? A really bad idea.
What diseases? He don't fuck her any more so no chance for him getting STD...he just rent her out n get money while she get banged...
I like the way he did it...
But if I were him I would have stomped those Asshole ball n damage them beyond repair n them losing em balls...
As for his wife I like it that he getting money by selling her to b fucked.... I would have added by bring my own lady friend a fuck her...or go out with other women n start a new relationship.. while keeping his wife just for running a whore house...
Another JPB classic sick story about sick and very disturbed people doing all kind of revulsive things. A well earned 1 star.
again. Great imagination. Bizarre perspective on life and women.
Far to much "Acceptance" and forgiveness! It's time for the men of this world to take it back. Fuck political correctness. When you step over the line you give up your rights.
Don't know that I could do sloppy seconds. I would've got up then wash the fuck off of my cock then stated the line of guys. Look at the extra income your bring in. All cash of course. Gotta remember she wants to be a whore so make money with her ass she wont give him any. Whining time is over for her. Time to earn your keep bitch. Like he said if she doesn't like it get the fuck out.
And maximum humiliation for the cunt.
5-stars & Favorite
I rarely like stories like this but the fact that the wife ultimately got punished it what won me over. lol
Is when t he husband decided her infidelity is a turn on. Thankfully , this is not the case in JPB stories.
it's a turn-on....it's revenge. She will get tired of it and leave. I'm sure it's his plan.
She is a whore and deserves everything she’s getting. The gang bang boys aren’t having fun either.
The aresholes just had their knees smashed. There should have been more done. A baseball bat to the testicles would have shattered his pelvis and made them unable to have sex again.
stupid. don't waste your time; just another JPB middle finger to the readers.
I like a lot of JPB's work but this one started out bad and went downhill in a hurry! Sorry........
If he was mad she cheated how did it help to bcome her pimp no man worthy of the name would act like th mc
Word salad with diarrhea dressing.
Ann shouldn't have gotten off without consequences.
She was the designated driver and was supposed to be keeping an eye on Bess because everyone knew she liked to drink and would get herself into trouble.
Instead she sat by and thought it was funny as the strippers force fed drinks to Bess. Then she goes to the bathroom, taking her eyes off Bess and leaving her unattended even though she knew Bess was hammered.
Then she goes home and doesn't let Fred know what happened.
The cheating afterwards is all on Bess. What happened the night of the bachelorette party is totally on Ann.
Disliked this a lot. 1 star. How the hell could he even Stand to have her in the house? Everything after he had the report was totally stupid.
Bill S.