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Brother, Please?

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A short confession letter to my favorite brother.
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Brother dear,

I do miss you so, after having had our little alcohol fueled reunion last week. I have to confess that I have never had a kiss that felt as good as that drunken, accidental one. Your lips are perfect. Do you remember what you said after? well, I agree now. I feel shy but maybe it could be fun do some other things together... Though it might be considered "wrong" by society, I think that is a construct and not something to worry much about. Really, there is nothing bad about keeping it in the family. It is only taboo because of messed up children, right? Unless...this is kind of awkward...but did you confess you wanted to bang your big sis because you were drunk? Me too, if that is how you feel. Teehee.

If you have been looking at me all these years...I have been looking at you, watching you grow from my cute little bro, who I used to help bathe, into this luscious, lovely , grown man has been an interesting journey. I can be honest, you are family. You would never tattle on me, you never have.

If you would consider a proposal, I would just love too, umm, become really close with your penis. I can say prick, right? Sweetheart, after last week, I dunno. I am still thinking about it. If you let me, I would like if you would just, ahh, how do I say this? Let me blow you, please? I can promise you would have a great time. I will buy you some liquid encourgement, if you like. I would just really like to taste you. I will go slow, if it seems too weird, we can stop. I think I can make you feel so good, you won't be thinking of anything else. If anything, you will want to make love to me after.

First, I want to kiss you, of course. You are a surprisingly good kisser. I would softly kiss every spot on your your angel face before moving a bit lower. You have the most beautiful eyes. Most of our family has brown eyes, you got lucky, bro. I definitely need to give your chest some attention and I will trail my fingers up and down, as I work my way lower. You have always loved my massages...but I have business to attend to. Just writing this letter to you is making me think of your cock, and nothing else. I am becoming turned on. My pussy kind of just contracted as though you were in me. Actually, like 4 times, my insides just throbbed..See, it does not seem so weird, us doing it together. I would spring you free from you pants and lick your prick and get it really wet. Do you still have a thing with spit? I can spread my saliva all over your delicious cock until it shines. I will just allow extra spit to slowly drip to the floor. I want you, my heart rate is up even now. But I want to please you, sweet brother, so much, that I do not need anything in return. Let me take your cock slowly into my mouth, but as soon as you acclimate to my loving lips, I will suck on you like you have never felt.

I admit I looked at the bulge in your pants for almost an hour after you past out last Saturday.

You looked so big and firm in your clothes. Do you want me to to play with your balls? I love the way they feel in my hand. I think I would alternate between gentle licking up and down your shaft and sucking as hard as you can take. I don't want you to accidentally cum too soon, or not in my mouth! I really want to taste you and I want you to do one little thing for me. As you start to get close to cumming, please just grab me by each side of my face and stick your cock in my mouth so deep that I gag. I want it. You can move my head fast, slow, violently or gently. I do not care if I can not breathe, I would like to be almost be suffocated by you. I will just keep on sucking however you like it until you cum in my mouth and throat. I will not waste a drop and can not wait to swallow every bit of your juice as you spurt. What do you say my dear, beloved brother?

~L

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NorthernVAMNorthernVAMabout 2 years ago

i'm not sure what type of feedback you were looking for. I guess in the spirit of full disclosure, the stories that have the most appeal to me tend to be ones that have more of a build up of the sexual tension between the brother and the sister. I'm not really a great person to turn to for literary criticism, but if you were serious about wanting feedback, here is my reaction to your story.

I liked the idea of a sister writing a letter to her brother ... and starting to disclose her feelings for him within the letter. I also thought that the idea in the back story was a good start, although I wanted to know more about how they came to have an "accidental kiss" while they were drinking. What didn't work for me was how fast she disclosed her lustful desires for him. He's her little brother (I have no clue about the age difference), and so somehow she has transformed from a protective older sister to a somewhat of a cougar for her little brother.

So, this is the confusing part to me .. does she want to make love to her brother .. is her lustful desire for her brother just that, lustful desire and she doesn't really have deep emotions for him? In my universe, her motivation wouldn't be so much to "fuck him" as it would be to express her love for him through kissing, caressing, and touching. This is where there is a bit of disconnect as well .. was it just one kiss that unleashed this?

I think the story would be much more realistic if they had a drunken night where they were drinking together, and then started to kiss, and spent the night together, not having intercourse, and maybe not even having any clothes come off, but having this long passionate erotic session, where they both eventually are so exhausted that they fall asleep in each other's arms, and wake up the next day feeling vulnerable and awkward and unable to talk about the night before. It is the tension that is caused by the inability to discuss what happened and their feelings for each other that is obsessing her, but yet she doesn't have the courage to talk to him directly and has to put her feelings on paper.

I think from there -- her letter could get more erotic as it goes along -- but I think it would be much more interesting if it was less "pornographic" (i.e. I want to blow you) and more erotic (i.e. "Every time I see you, I have this longing desire to reach out an touch you ...but I know that I can't because I don't want to risk anyone seeing me do it ..." and "Every night, when I go to bed, I think of our night together, with our bodies entwined, and kissing each other so passionately .. and I want to feel that again ..." and "And as I lie in bed thinking of how we kissed .. my fingers slide down underneath my tops of my panties and I start to touch myself ... thinking about how it would feel if it were your fingers touching me rather than my own ..."

I think about how I would undress you ... I'd start by unbuttoning your shirt and allowing my hands to run across your firm chest, feeling the heat rise off of your body ... .. or I want to run my fingertips across your nipples and feel your getting aroused for me .. I want you to desire me as much as I desire you.

OK .. hopefully you can see what my approach would be ... but then maybe you weren't going for more eroticism ... So, that's my feedback, if you're interested in discussing it more .. just drop me a line back.

Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 3 years ago

I am hoping this will lead to a relationship with these sexy siblings.

YourgirlfriendLauraYourgirlfriendLauraalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Yeay! This is based on an actual letter I sent to my "brother." I will figure out how to edit if possible...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I hope we get to read his response. Great story. Thanks for sharing.

AsgarthAsgarthalmost 3 years ago

Sorry I did not find this story very stimulating

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