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Big Brother Knows Best

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Nala sat at the front steps, a cigarette and a glass of wine in her hand. Her nails, long half moon specks of red that matched her full and pouting lips.

Maddox liked her look. Classic, beautiful...sexy. Yes, he would admit only to the deepest most pitiful part of himself, he was attracted to her. Of all people, his body ignited to the flame of his little sister.

To the delicate heart shape face, to her lush, long blonde locks that fell artfully about her sunken in waist and full hips.

Family visits like these were short. Once he turned eighteen he left his home, his loving parents and sister for any type of escape he could find from those desires. It happened so it was the military which found him, and he had spent the past eight years dutifully and admirably serving. In between seeing his little girl turn into the beaut she is today. A milky skinned, sumptuous eighteen year old.

He was dragged from inappropriate thoughts when she finally took notice of an approaching figure, her blue gaze falling into Maddox's golden one. Her smile was sincere as she scrambled to embrace him. Her body was warm as it pressed into him, melting away the filter once again and he inhaled her scent deeply, allowing his fingers to curl in her hair as he enjoyed the closeness of her.

A bit dazed as she broke away, he spoke almost too softly to her as they caught up and the evening progressed. But it wasn't unusual to anyone who took notice, because it had always been that way. Maddox's parents would often accuse him of spoiling the girl. Every birthday gift topped the next Christmas one and nothing she did was ever foul. Even the little temper she had.

As the night died down it wound up to being just them two on the couch. It didn't seem much different than any other one they'd shared, they sipped on their drinks and told stories, new and old when very suddenly, and unwarranted Nala procured a very stirring question.

"How do you make a girl cum?"

Maddox almost spit up his drink, the words falling from her mouth echoed to his groin, causing him to look with much horror at himself, in between her legs up to her full and perky c's.

"Surely you've made yourself cum...Haven't you?" His hardening cock twitched at the question.

So much more lurked in it than just rhetoric. He licked his lips, a predator-like instinct possessing his thoughts as he scanned the blushing face of his prey.

"Well...I have but is it different for every girl?"

"Everyone likes different things..." He should have stopped there but the rest just flowed out...

"Some girls will like slow and soft sometimes and hard and fast others. But it's well known that a little attention to the clit can make a big difference. What makes you ask me?"

He wondered the last bit aloud and the girl blushed again, her thighs pressing together as more wetness seeped into her panties, she could feel her swollen lips just aching for a stroke of some fingers. No, not just anyone's either, she knew just who she wanted to make her cum. She had for a long time.

"Honestly." She began, whispering as she leaned in closer to him, making him shift, his eager body wanting as much of hers as he could get away with.

"No guy I've been with in any way has ever been able to make me cum. Or girl."

Her big brother blinked at her in surprise. The idea of his little sister with another girls face buried between her legs as she cried out was almost too much and his cock was fully hard now and in desperate need of some mercy.

His facade of nonchalance dropped and he gave a small groan "Jezz Nala, spare me a little okay?"

The girls head gave a coy little turn as she eyed him curiously.

He laughed and said. "I'm sure you just haven't met someone who knows how to read your body yet."

"Read my body?" She repeated sultrily, and he wondered if that was how he was speaking to her first or if she had started it.

"Yes...Know what gets you going. Or you meet a person who can just fuck you until you have no choice but to cum."

The girl gave him a slightly shocked expression, he couldn't blame her, he could hardly believe he had said that aloud himself.

But the comment made her belly swim with desire, the thought of her brother, her overly protective big brother pounding away at her juicy cunt was a breath stealing idea that left a trail of goosebumps.

She wanted to reach down and rub her clit for him, the exhibitionist in her wanton and insatiable. "Maddox..." She said with a need he mistook with her earlier shock.

Giving a little laugh he apologized, saying "I always was too open with you about everything even when you were young and I wonder about your flagrant sexuality."

He teased her, giving her a little shake on her chin with his strong, long fingers that Nala had always been so interested in.

"I want you to do it." She blurted, leaning in even more, so that she was almost on him now. The emptiness of the large couch bringing their embrace even greater intimacy as Maddox tried to formulate a coherent thought to her whimpered confession.

He knew what she was implying, her body spoke enough but before he could ask what she meant anyway, she slipped one of her legs across his, her hands at his shoulders, inviting him in.

"I want you to make me cum." Her voice dripping with dirty urges and almost sweetly polite as she raised her dress for him, revealing her lace thong and more of her soft skin. He dared his hands to roam up her sides, reveling in the form of her hourglass.

"Nala." He groaned, his head resting on the back of the couch as she began to grind herself on the thick bulge of his pants.

"I see the way you look at me, the way you always have." She moaned as she continued her assault, licking and rubbing herself on him with a lust mirrored by his own frantic grips and grabs of her tight body, his hands owning as much as he dared.

"I've waited for you and I know, I know you've been waiting a long time for me too. So take me now, make me yours, anyway you want just...use me."

The last of her words barely making its way out as Maddox suddenly grabbed her hips tightly, with little effort placing her beneath him, locking her arms above her head with one hand, his hips winning over her bucking as he stayed her almost fully.

"Shh Little Nala..." He beckoned, relaxing her frenzy as they met an a intense stare.

Maddox caressed his young sisters cheek, the smooth porcelain of her neck and chest. They could not look away, the eye contact making it all the more real...all the more erotic...dirty.

"My little girl has been so needy -" All of her was open to him as he grabbed at her lips with his own, the only sounds were the sweet sucking and meeting of tongues.

Nala groaned, her back arching, forcing herself into him, again rubbing her breasts and clit against him, hard, making him salivate.

"Please." She began to whine softly, just as she would.

"My impatient little Nala, so eager..." He smiled into her neck, taking pleasure in her torture. "Don't worry little one, you don't have to wait much longer."

Abruptly, all contact seized, as he began to bring them both up to a sitting position again, a distinct sound of displeasure came from below but before she could question Maddox smiled, a soft teasing look back in his sharp, angled features.

"Come, time for bed."

"But..Why-?" She began to protest but he caught her in a quick kiss saying simply -

"Big brother knows best."

Nala was fully pouting now and by the time he had her in her bed, she had stopped meeting his eyes, a soft pink staying in her cheeks as she shyly cursed herself for her her obvious affections until Maddox said in a deep, near growl of a tone before he left the room. One reminding her what just took place...

"Tomorrow, I'll pick you from school and take you to my apartment."

A chilling want covered her body heavier than her blanket as she dreamed of wet panties, long fingers and her brothers promise for the night to follow...

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Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 7 years ago
A conclusion would be lovely

Now you have me all wound up could you please consider finishing this story?

rhimshot415rhimshot415over 9 years ago
Incredibly Bad Grammar

Despite an intriguing story set up, this should have been edited before you submitted it to the site because of the bad grammar. And I should know; I've submitted eight stories without benefit of editing, and I am very sorry about all of them.

Right now I have two stories out with an editor. I will not submit them until I get his feedback. There are a lot of editors available: use one.

Areala-chanAreala-chanover 9 years ago
Good Start

Not bad for a first submission.

Ignore the people who complain about slang. Real people use slang in conversations every day, and it makes the dialogue more realistic. Nobody speaks perfect English constantly in real life.

That said, I really recommend reading your story out loud to yourself (at the very least, the dialogue) during the editing and revising process. Lines that your eyes read normally can sound terribly awkward when verbalised. Example: "I always was too open with you about everything even when you were young and I wonder about your flagrant sexuality." Without punctuation, this reads as one long, quickly-rambled sentence. I find it best to break up long sentences like this with commas so the characters have a chance to catch their breath, or with periods to make the result punchier. I might re-write the line like this:

"I always was too open with you about everything, even when you were young. Now I wonder if that hurt more than it helped. Especially with your flagrant sexuality."

One other suggestion: you've got a picture in your head of who Maddox and Nala are as characters, but the transition from your imagination to the page is incomplete. The more fleshed out and real your characters are in the story, the hotter it makes the action. We know Maddox was a soldier, we know Nala's got pale skin, we know they're attractive, but we need more than that. This is a short encounter, true, so there's not a lot of time for character building, but as a reader I need to know lots more. I need to believe they're doing what they're doing for a good reason, and right now the only reason they're getting together is "because the author says so". That's fine if that's what you're going for, but if you want that rating higher and that coveted 'H' beside the story's title, this is one of the best ways to get there. :)

Get yourself in with the volunteer editor program, especially if you don't have much experience with writing, or at least browse the 'How To' section of the site. Lovecraft68, MaxSebastian, and Tink4Fairy all have useful guides to getting the most out of your characters and the section to which you're submitting.

Right now, Maddox and Nala are two-dimensional paper cut-outs. They're cute, but they're far from real. Help them find their way into a 3D printer so we can see them, appreciate them, and best of all understand and applaud them when they finally push through into the "final frontier". :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
don't worry

your use of slang is fine. Only an american would complain about something so trivial. Those words, 'jeez and beaut, are used in every English speaking country and most of the U.S. as well. Keep up what you are doing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
An editor would help.

Also ,if you're going to use Australasian slang terms like "beaut" or "jeez", you're probably going to confuse a few readers if you don't explicitly set the scene and put your story in Australia or New Zealand where terms like that are common, eh.

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