by Schaka
ENJOYED YOUR STORY, ALTHOUGH THE ILLUSTRATIONS WOULD NOT APPEAR FOR ME. I DO NOT KNOW IF THIS IS A PROBLEM WITH MY COMPUTER OR WITH LITEROTICA. IN ANY EVENT, CONTINUE WITH THE WRITING AND GOOD LUCK.
The build up was a little fast but, the banter was great. Keep up the good work!!
It's Literotica. This is ar least the 3rd one today where the pictures didn't appear.
Too much erotic, please carry on by adding more characters and families. Thanks and have a nice day..
Didn't look at a pic for a bit and i was delighted to see a wave or two of grey hair.
My mind was sloppy and had a picture of a playboy type thing. Thought it was cool when the illustrator put in some reality. That detail made it seem more realistic.
Typed the word Playboy and it reminded me that magasine is gone.
Absolutely loved the story and the pics. So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!
There must be a second part to this story,starting from the passing scene to a more passionate love making.
Yea she's got huge tits and nice wet pussy that he filled with his cum and she's got a nice mouth for his Dick !!
Hot! Great illustrations and great writing. Can't wait for the next episode(s), hopefully a series. Maybe bring in some other fam members,maybe a hot gilf. Nothing hotter than a hot threeway between son,gran and mom. Plenty of potential. Keep it up.
the story in itself is ok. TK U MLJ LV NV
Awesome story, well written and detailed. Loved it, kept me hard throughout the whole story. Great work,
HOT HOT HOT!
NEXT CHAPTER, THE SON IMPREGNATES HER AFTER SHE GIVES BIRTH !
Not into the gay aspect of the son's past or the whole swinger lifestyle but the scene illustrated here was interesting. If things go according to form the rest of your stories will also involve too many lifestyle kinks that turn me off so I'll quit on this mainly positive note.
Amazingly erotic! A very easy 5 made all the more exciting with the addition of wonderful quality illustrations! So very good. Thank you for all of it.
I gave it a 3.
Like other readers I didn't like the gay part of it. He had sex with both men and women. And like a few of your readers I would like to see the son get his mother pregnant. If I was fucking my pregnant mother and as I was sliding in and out of her hot wet pregnant pussy, I would whisper in her mouth..."I wish the baby growing in you was my baby mother. I want to father babies with you mother."
I loved the story and the illustrations but now it is the time to complain about a pet peeve. The son is a masseur not a masseuse. That is the wrong gender. People commonly make that mistake and I don't know why and it annoys me every time I see it.
The story you wrote is absolutely a great one, makes me want to fuck and feed on pregnant women. Keep up the GREAT WORK 👍 👌.
I loved giving my mom massages, when I was a boy. She had such a sexy body. 34C 22 35, 5foot tall & 105lb, she looked just like Sally Field in Smokey & the Bandit. I would massage her whole body for an hour every week, after we would get home from the beach