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Truly beautiful story well written and totally believable. We are sure that there would be far fewer divorces and separations if more couples experimented in the lifestyle like this

Liked it.

Short & original.

Write a follow up how it affected his life.

A really good stroker with a degree of curiosity about how you got your knowledge about so many sex toys. Personal investigation and in-store browsings perhaps? Either way a horny read, thank you

Sexy and fun.

I took the time to read more about the USS Arizona, and especially about Lou Conter. The man was a true hero, perhaps imbued with a bit of Mike Radley magic. An unexpected, and quite touching, tribute to the crew of the ship.

I don’t seem to be doing well picking up on things....

FYI, you spelled foe paws right, but it’s wrong. I’m practicing my Captain Obvious persona. :-)

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I really enjoyed this. I’m a sucker, though. I put something in Loving Wives to get more visibility. It was my Christmas story about a truly loving wife.

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My first story was a 750...

That was pretty great....the fact that Martin was going to get curb-stomped cracked me up. The looks on his pretty-boy face after several dozen stitches and a few broken teeth would be hilarious.

Great read. 5*

A very good start to the story. Keep it going 5*

Great story and characters

Marianne, I am very envious of Carl's treatment, I want to volunteer for similar, but only if you personally perform the act. I'm ready any time you are! xx. 5 Stars!

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My issue is the ending wrapped it up as a series of almost bullet points and it feels an afterthought. She still WANTS to do it.

At no point do we see a swerve until Alastair is nasty to her. Then it's all "oh what a MEANIE".

I THINK it'd have been better if she'd had her come to...

Great story. However, you briefly had Miranda wearing pantyhose, “I rubbed my hands over Miranda's pantyhose-covered ass. Her pantyhose was the softest I'd ever felt. I could have done this forever and been content, but I finally stripped her pantyhose off,”. Minor faux pas, but...

Good premise but much too wordy. Needs prooning somewhat.

Hot story and so well told!

Cheers

SAGE

I suspect Professor Cable has a good chance of "turning state's evidence". Though she probably profited from the scheme, the fact she was coerced into it will help tremendously.

Obviously, still out of a job and likely blacklisted from working at any military schools but doesn't...

oh shit

I love this story and can’t wait for the next chapter.

Loved the story and more how Wendy was so compassionate towards her husband.

🙋👍👍👍👍👍😘😁💯💯🌹🤷🤷😉keep um coming.... Plz

Shame that the ending was so anti-climactic and limp. This feels like it would've been ripe for an ongoing series.

This was an interesting read…

Another hot Carl story! I had to read as soon as I saw it. Please keep them cumming .....er... I mean him cum....no no I mean keep the stories coming! Yes! The stories!

Personally I think a lot of 18 year old males would enjoy being "abused" and "embarrassed" the way you subject Carl...

A beautiful story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

Well written but felt it could have been filled in more, skimmed the confrontation and the immediate aftermath, just jumped to the end.

Usual shenanigans going on in South Louisiana!

5

Yet another excellent chapter offering us little snippets of information. Now there’s mention of a curse and then there’s the obvious friction between the General and the Counselor. Poor Anna Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

5* loved this story very erotic. Love BBC stories. Please write part 2 soon.

Great SOH. enjoyed it.

Eh, I think some more naked Mark would've really rounded out this final chapter.

Intriguing and unique. A true original. Well done, again!

Great story. Thanks.

Excellent read though, I do wonder with his sisters' multi relationships whether there was more to it.

I'll lay out my criticism up-front. The ending was a little rushed and forced, and it felt slightly anticlimactic. With that said, the rest of this story was lovely, romantic and enticing. The end lead right to where I expected it to. Harddaysknight is a consistently solid writer...