This is pretty interesting to read. As someone who likes to eat creampie, it's interesting to get the female perspective of eating and receiving. I'm glad you shared your fantasy and I hope it becomes reality!

Oh wow, what a fun story, I hope you decide to do another chapter

Ah, The plot thickens! Great start. More soon please.

Wait wait wait ... you can have a cuck story that doesn't end with either:
a) the husband reduced to a 2nd-class citizen in his own home
b) the husband destroying the life of the woman he loves
c) the wife running off with her lover

They can just, talk things out over a period of time & move on? What sort of madness is this?

- thank you for the comment, I'm glad you liked the story. I had plans to continue it but we'll see if I ever manage to do it. Right now, I'm stuck with a bunch of projects...

I do wish he was the one to use the safe word though.

I’m shocked that a cuck story turned out like this. This is more realistic than anything I have read.

Nice start - good acolyte-mentor set-up. Looking forward to the next story. you write well.

Interesting start, just not exactly sure why the GF wanted revenge.

This was way different from what I usually enjoy. I did get aroused by the way Spy became more animal. I have a love of the uncontrolled mind control of baser instincts. I was really aroused by the breeding, even with the pee part of it, which is not anything I do enjoy.

This so hot, the author must be a male.....

A wonderful introduction for the boy

Love it, pls write the sequence.. I cannot wait

I've had dreams of a girl I work with doing this to me!!!

Excellent beginning to explore the Findom rush for Domm.