In fiction, it's easy to watch your wife fucked by another man, but how many married males are willing to see their wives penetrated by another male? Back to fiction, this is a well-written story, with a plausible plot, well-described characters, almost perfect dialogue, and an interesting sex scene. The gradual increase in Alex's commitment to the project, and losing herself in the process of sexual posing and picture-taking was the heart of the story. The husband's willingness to see his wife penetrated and fucked was, for me, an amazing part of the story. How much further are her husband and Alex willing to go before she becomes a slut and he becomes a voyeur.

Delicious!

Helping guide another man's cock into your wife's vagina is a truly glorious experience. The only thing better is to follow this a few minutes later with another man's cock, then another, followed by another. Then spend the rest of the party watching all that cum oozing out of her whilst she remains the only one naked, serving drinks and snacks to all who have just fucked her.

Luv cum dumps...have known many over the years.truly the greatest of all women.great story...hopefully will read many more of your tales.huggs.5 baby.

Can’t wait for part 3!! Hope it’s get published sooner than later!!

I agree with one of the comments. I feel like a kid in the back seat. I know the place we're going is going to be awesome, but I keep asking, are we there yet?

Where are parts 1 & 2?

Lovely premise.
Nice setup.
Sex is MUCH too automatic. Too mechanical. Too rushed.
She doesn't ask him if her tits are/feel as good as he imagined they would.
She doesn't comment on how he plays with them.
She doesn't ask him whether he's enjoying the tit-fuck. Or make any indication about how his cock feels to her between her tits.
Four stars. Close to five, but four.

Nicely done, but watch your comma splices. You can't connect two independent clauses with a comma. You have three options: 1) use a comma with a conjunction, 2) make them separate sentences, or 3) use a semicolon in place of a comma. Two examples:

"I hope it helps you finish, you deserve it for working so hard."

This example should be two separate sentences, or you could replace the comma with a semicolon.

"I'm not meaning to torture you, it just gets me so hard knowing how badly other guys want you."

You could fix this example by writing, "I'm not meaning to torture you, but it just gets me so hard knowing how badly other guys want you." You could also make it two separate sentences or use a semicolon.

Why is it that NO ONE has any respect for Brian? Not his slut wife Sarah nor any of the women. Certainly none of the males have any respect for him. They just want to play sex games with his slut wife. She is licking and sucking and teasing and walking around naked... and cuck boy Brian does nothing. Has he no self respect nor a backbone at all? He's just a slave servant who collects the coffee and watches his slut in action like some deviant voyeur. He is vomit material.

Good story, imagine if there was a mirror and unknown to the husband she could also see the guy and that's what made her cum

This is a beautiful, true, well-told erotic story. Ben courageously reveals his deepest secret and it took even more bravery for her husband to encourage his wife to expose her exquisite mammary glands to Ben. I've had two wives who've been blessed with large, shapely breasts, and I would never have encouraged either of them to show her near-perfect globes to a friend. Just jealous I guess. Fortunately, both of my wives were modest and I would not have been able to encourage them to expose themselves. However, I can believe that such a scenario happened as evidenced by several commentators.

Very erotic and surprising. My wife and I read stories as a from of foreplay and this story did the trick. We both got very horny reading it. We look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks.

Glad you enjoyed it, much more to come.

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!