Note: so tired of reading the word “ smirk”. I think at one point it was used like 3 times in 2 sentences. Sneer, snigger, chortle, snicker, titter, chuckle. Come on, man, use your thesaurus.
Nope. She lied. She’d been with Byron before. Probably in the initial extra week of chastity at the end of September. She planned the month, with others, without ever discussing it with him. She exposed their sex games, and him, to HER friends. F her. He can do much, much better. And without her, he can cuck the shit out of Byron with Celeste. Seriously, F her.
If I had a wandering eye for other woman as a married man, it is clearly insulting and disrespectful to my wife, and threatning the trust in our marriage. I am the kind of guy who learns best from harsh corporal punishment, particularly many hard swats with a large wooden paddle. While it would have been agony to be paddled so hard and long, the means justify the ends. My wondering eye would wonder no more and I will have learned to fully respect my wife as a woman and to be grateful she chose to correct me and not leave. A wife that knows her husband is truly a gift. God bless the women in our lives.
Very sexy, erotic, arousing, with some awesome creative ideas. I really like Arthur
I personally would not share my guy, so this continuous campaign of hers to hook him up with whoever she can is really annoying me (and I know what’s coming because I’m reading this when there are already 22 chapters) but that’s just me projecting.
On the other hand, her constantly negotiating and arguing with him while maintaining her “slavedom “ should be grating on him. Maybe he’d rather have sub that is actually submissive. Of course, if it bothered him that much, maybe he’d actually do something about it.
Hey people calling out this lady as bitch and cussing writer ,, pls take it as a fiction ... in reality nothing happen like this ...
I dont get it that in reality i am medical student , and have a succesful career,, have good speaking skills and been to many one night stands , i gym daily and i am muscular , but i have avg height of 5'7 .. i am dominant and extrovert but i like to read such stories
The point is , dont relate it in real life treat women like humans... and dont worry women hate dominating in real life .. its only upto bed..just take it lightly ...
sorry in my previous response I addressed you as 'Anonymous' but I now realise you did sign your message.
It's an interesting point. I agree with you that there's a difference between discipline and violence, absolutely. And yet, I think we find both things, together and separately, within BDSM (certainly within fiction - I'm not commenting on anyone's real relationship). The important thing, for me, is that it's consensual. She is there out of her own free will and a part of her is enjoying it. She's a masochist so all sort of things that she likes may not always be good for her.
I hope that makes some sense :-) Thank you for reading!
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about the story. When you say 'She’s doing all of this at her master’s orders but frankly it comes across as her being whored out on loan to two strangers', that's kind of exactly what is going on - that's the nature of their dynamic. He likes to demonstrate his ownership of her in all sorts of devious ways.
In terms of why the men slap her, well.... it's a story about sadists and a masochist, so there'll be lots of stuff that doesn't make sense outside of that mindset. I hope it didn't disturb you.
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Should there be a picture in the middle of the text? My browser showed me a little box reserved for an image, but nothing in there...
Probably ought to read the succeeding thirty some chapters
Thank you so much for your kind comments. Chapter Two is in the works.
Great story. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ for sure.
Note: so tired of reading the word “ smirk”. I think at one point it was used like 3 times in 2 sentences. Sneer, snigger, chortle, snicker, titter, chuckle. Come on, man, use your thesaurus.
Nope. She lied. She’d been with Byron before. Probably in the initial extra week of chastity at the end of September. She planned the month, with others, without ever discussing it with him. She exposed their sex games, and him, to HER friends. F her. He can do much, much better. And without her, he can cuck the shit out of Byron with Celeste. Seriously, F her.
My dream come true!
To be married to a woman who accepts my cross-dressing and enjoys my masculiry at the same time.
With the added bonus of being to shag her best friends on a regular basis .
Heaven on a stick!
Awesome
What a delicious story. I don’t know if that’s the end, but either way I hope you continue writing. I am an enthusiastic fan.
If I had a wandering eye for other woman as a married man, it is clearly insulting and disrespectful to my wife, and threatning the trust in our marriage. I am the kind of guy who learns best from harsh corporal punishment, particularly many hard swats with a large wooden paddle. While it would have been agony to be paddled so hard and long, the means justify the ends. My wondering eye would wonder no more and I will have learned to fully respect my wife as a woman and to be grateful she chose to correct me and not leave. A wife that knows her husband is truly a gift. God bless the women in our lives.
Please give us a part 2. Cant wait to read more about those pussy piercings
Very sexy, erotic, arousing, with some awesome creative ideas. I really like Arthur
I personally would not share my guy, so this continuous campaign of hers to hook him up with whoever she can is really annoying me (and I know what’s coming because I’m reading this when there are already 22 chapters) but that’s just me projecting.
On the other hand, her constantly negotiating and arguing with him while maintaining her “slavedom “ should be grating on him. Maybe he’d rather have sub that is actually submissive. Of course, if it bothered him that much, maybe he’d actually do something about it.
Anyway, 5 ⭐️
Hey people calling out this lady as bitch and cussing writer ,, pls take it as a fiction ... in reality nothing happen like this ...
I dont get it that in reality i am medical student , and have a succesful career,, have good speaking skills and been to many one night stands , i gym daily and i am muscular , but i have avg height of 5'7 .. i am dominant and extrovert but i like to read such stories
The point is , dont relate it in real life treat women like humans... and dont worry women hate dominating in real life .. its only upto bed..just take it lightly ...
Hi Tess
sorry in my previous response I addressed you as 'Anonymous' but I now realise you did sign your message.
It's an interesting point. I agree with you that there's a difference between discipline and violence, absolutely. And yet, I think we find both things, together and separately, within BDSM (certainly within fiction - I'm not commenting on anyone's real relationship). The important thing, for me, is that it's consensual. She is there out of her own free will and a part of her is enjoying it. She's a masochist so all sort of things that she likes may not always be good for her.
I hope that makes some sense :-) Thank you for reading!
Hi Anonymous,
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about the story. When you say 'She’s doing all of this at her master’s orders but frankly it comes across as her being whored out on loan to two strangers', that's kind of exactly what is going on - that's the nature of their dynamic. He likes to demonstrate his ownership of her in all sorts of devious ways.
In terms of why the men slap her, well.... it's a story about sadists and a masochist, so there'll be lots of stuff that doesn't make sense outside of that mindset. I hope it didn't disturb you.
Hi CheekyDick1960, thank you so much - there's more coming soon :-)